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I honestly thought about that. Had a burnout few weeks ago but managed to thrive and get back to rewrite my story. It worked. I got a lot more views, my writing improved and people are commenting at least sometimes. It was hard to get the readers I have and yet, I know people who got a lot more...

It sure is, I'm just focusing on other stuff and it is indeed a challenge :x

I started to write a training arc today. The idea I use is that there is a romance sub plot happening in the back while the MC is also learning about how the world and his powers work. There may be some skips or blurs like the other person said, but it will also move the characters forward in...

I read the first chapter and the synopsis, sadly, here is my take: I read a part of your story and like, the synopsis is really off. Not only the punctuation, but couldn't understand what it is about. You added 2 other parts, one for the characters, which felt really whatever to be there and a...

I appreciate a review. The dialogue was a first time I heard someone comment about, but I see what you are mean. I've been reading some other stories, but honestly, they are quite old fantasy books with some cringe interactions that I try to avoid copying but manage to do something similar or...

Being honest, idk why, i dont remember writing that description lol Gonna change that after finishing editing some other stuff. thanks I think it was because I just woke up, just now after a few hours I understand what you meant lol

Thanks for the review. Already working on the changes you mentioned. I already rewrote the first three chapter and fixed a lot of plot holes I had. About the protagonist, one of the issues that was bugging me and a friend pointed out was the fact that I was changing POVs a lot, which was also...

Thank you for the feedback Some friends also read the first 3 chapters yesterday and also gave me some good points, also what you said about "What the story is about?" I had a sketch of an important scene that I would add later, but when I showed it to my friends they all asked why it is not...

I've been posting this story have almost a month. I believe I improved thanks to the help of people on Discord and would like to ask for opinions on the story content and sequencing. I finished what would be the "1st part" and is finishing editing what is the second part of the story...