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I'm new here, I just posted my first 10 chapters. I had published them on Webnovel but didn’t get any visibility. I hope here I can get honest feedback. Also, I love reading the beginnings of other authors' stories and giving feedback myself! It really helps to improve.

Hi, I've read the first few chapters, and the story seems to have a lot of potential. I think it's generally well written, but I had trouble fully getting into it because I feel like it lacks context and descriptions.

Hello :) I agree with the opinion that says the synopsis is too long and too detailed. I read the first three chapters, and I really like the writing style; it's simple and concise, and I think the story is well introduced.