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Ez good. Ill be honest I got a strong bias since I love eldritch horror. I read whats current and I dont have much to say. Its interesting, your descriptions can border poetic in a good way, Albert is a fun character, the world is interesting too. At least to me it really is just an all around...

Aight okay just the title is enough to get my interest. Yeah I gotchu, up for a trade? I started writin again and want some feedback. Either way I gotchu on feedback. How ya want it? Review or here or message

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1575241/reincarnated-as-a-wood-golemreboot/ I guess both. Its a reboot of something I wrote a few years back so Id appreciate it if ya looked at the original too but I also appriciate any advice period since I want to improve. Thanks for any advice or reviews...

A few years back i wrote here but had to stop for certain reasons. I regretted it so Im doing it again. So far its well recieved but im not really all that satisfied and want to see where I can improve. If anyone is willing could they please take a look and tell me what could use work. Id also...

Sure I'll leave a review. I hope you can do the same. Tell me if the plot has any issues delivery. Any major plot holes I may have missed. Oh and if any of the future plot point hints are obvious for a reader. I got kind of the same issues. I just ask that you aren't too harsh. I'll be the same.

So I took a break for a year because life was kind of destroying me. Anyways I finaly uploaded the final chapter for the arc that I ended up leaving for so long. Really regret it. I'm asking if anyone is willing to do a complete review. I'm hoping you will read to the end which is 14 chapter at...

Thanks I've always had difficulty drawing dudes. Advice dually noted. If I manage to save this monstrosity I will go ahead and post it again showing off as hard as I possibly can.

So I tried to draw a charector from my story and accidentally made him a little too feminine. Anyways I already ruined it and I feel like being trash talked so come. End me!

Sorry about that was a little embarrassed. This story was the first thing I wrote so the quality was trash. Editing it to be readable hurt because god damn I was bad. I guess that's the best way to describe the story. Honestly this is just an experiment. I felt like trying out horror so here I...

.....I forgot to change the freaking synopsis. It's still the original. Basically I justed wanted to write a story based off of my grandmas story, just weirder. Figured I'd go for the unknown approach of horror but now that I'm wide awake and well rested I suddenly regret everything. Allright I...

When I first started writing I wanted to make my own version of this story my grandma used to tell me. It was sweet and innocent and then I figured what if I made it dark. I went ahead and tried posting but at the time I was a complete amateur. I'm still a newbie writer but I am better than...

Clearly you are all a bunch of tasteless idiots. The best anime of all time is clearly kodomo no jinkan. All the benefits of boku no pico with less of the moral ambiguity!

Either one, add your story and I'll do the same tommorow morning. Past midnight for me

Thankyou very much

I'm a newbie author and my story just reached chapter six including the introduction and I'd like some opinions. Honestly I dont even care about the review just lookin for someone to tell me what could use some improving. Anyways anyone who can give me advice I'll go ahead and review and rate...

I'm a newbie author who took a break to try and improve my writing. I understand that it still isnt the best but I would like other people opinion. If anybody's willing I just ask that you be honest as I really do wish to improve as a writer. Here is the link...

Thankyou I'll go ahead and take that into account with the next chapter

Alright Ima complete newbie author and I'm just hoping someone will tell me what they think of the first two chapters(Only ones I've posted) Trying to set a mood and give an idea of what the mc is like but ima newbie and I honestly dont fully trust myself to do a half decent review...

Here ya go