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Thank you. I think I knew that, but this was a good reality check. Appreciate the honest feedback.

Your average word count is 1k higher than mine, so 11 chapters would roughly equal 30k wc. I'm more than happy to do that, but to be fair, would you read the 14 chapters I have up (roughly 21k wc)?

I couldn’t get past the synopsis page, so I’ll focus my feedback there. It’s important to remember that writing a story isn’t just about putting words on a page—you’re also selling a product. To sell a product, you need to tell people what it is and why they want—no, need—to buy or read it...

The best way I can explain this to new writers is by comparing writing to the lens of a camera. The page or screen is your blank canvas or film, and your words and descriptions transform that emptiness into a living, breathing world. The lens—your narration—is the selective scope that presents...

I decided to give it a try because the synopsis made the character seem relatable, which is a positive, and the premise sounded entertaining and engaging. However, I didn’t get very far into the first chapter because it reads more like a script. The narrative consists of barebones descriptions...

In my experience (off this site), the sweet spot, on average, is 1.5k to 2.5k WC per chapter. Anything over 3k tends to strain web novel readers, so I can see why you might be struggling. Adding page breaks for transitions in the chapter might help allow the reader to take a figurative pause and...

I think word count also plays into it. I read somewhere not many stories survive past 25k, and most readers won't jump into something under 10k minimum (possibly more than that), so depending on where you are with word count, that might affect your growth. Focus on word count goals, such as...

Hello. Pen&Key. Are you still looking for a review swap? Our stories share similar genres and tags, so I thought I’d reach out. You can find more details via the link below. I can do either 10k (the first 7 chapters) or 15k (which would be the first 11 chapters), whichever you prefer. Please let...

Hello. I thought I might reserve a slot, as I'm sure you have quite the list going at this point. I would appreciate your sharp insight/feedback on my story. The link is provided below. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1381743/the-vampire-overlord-and-his-witch/