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I completely understand, thank you for the feedback. It's encouraging and motivates me to continue the story. I might consider adding a prologue or an event early on to tease the fantasy elements. Appreciate it!

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Thank you so much for telling me something no one else has lmao The core criticisms I'm taking away are Characters need more emotional depth The gangs should actually feel threatening Tonal whiplash between the high school hijinks vs the gang activities needs to be addressed There should be a...

Edit: Issue resolved, disregard. Hello, I scheduled several chapters out for my story Children of Eden, but I can't find them anywhere so I can potentially update or change them. They still seem to be posting correctly though. I'm checking for them under the "Table of Contents" section after...

Just added it to the post, thank you!

Hello, I've finished the first volume of an 80k story which I'd like to be an OELN (Original English Light Novel) one day. The story is Children of Eden. All my friends have told me it's great, but I don't feel like I've gotten any genuine feedback, and I have a pretty strong feeling there are...