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  1. SabrielSilver

    [Feedback Wanted] The Dragon Hunter’s Bond

    AI checkers aren’t reliable at this time so it’s a waste of time to use them. While it’s understandable that people, like you, may trust them, they often produce inaccurate results. It’s important to question claims made with such certainty, like yours, when the technology itself is still...
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    [Feedback Wanted] The Dragon Hunter’s Bond

    Hi Scribble Hub! I’m Sabriel Silver, and I just released the first three chapters of my new fantasy series The Dragon Hunter’s Bond. Expect: • A small, fierce dragon with sharp instincts • A desperate quest to save a dying twin • Skyships, dragons, sky pirates, shifting glyphs, and...
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    Synopsis

    A decade after the Great War reduced the world to shambles, an academy stands as humanity's hope, a place where the strongest rise, and failure costs everything. Within its halls, bonds are forged and tested in fire. Two Souls, One Destiny is a tale of the struggle to shape a shattered world.
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    What do you say is this a great start to romance novel.

    I think breaking up any large body of text into more digestible sizes is always a good idea! Plus you get readers by posting consistently so that's another reason to break it up into 10 chapters.
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    How to not feel bad for taking a break?

    I appreciate the advice, and I know it works well for some writers, but it’s important to remember that writing routines aren’t one-size-fits-all. For many people, trying to follow such a rigid schedule can lead to burnout or frustration. It’s crucial to find a schedule and pace that works for...
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    Need suggestions for a prologue

    I totally get the struggle with prologues - I’ve seen a lot of feedback from writers where readers associate prologues with info dumping, so I renamed my own prologue to chapter 1 for that reason. It was a bit of a bummer, because I wanted to tease the action to come to hook the readers in the...
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    How to not feel bad for taking a break?

    Congrats on writing 70,000 words! That is a huge accomplishment, and it makes sense that you are feeling burned out. Writing takes a lot of energy, and being tired doesn’t mean you are a bad writer. It means you have been working hard. The idea that authors write every day without fail is an...
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    ? Action Scene Alert! Help Me Perfect Chapter 6! ?

    I just published the newest chapter of The Amulet of Duality, and I’d love your feedback! This is one of my first full action scenes so feedback for is greatly appreciated! Things I’d love to know: Did the pacing of the action feel engaging and clear? Were the stakes effectively conveyed? Did...
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    Help Desired - Do My First Chapters Draw You In?

    Hello there, I’m Sabriel Silver, and I just shared the prologue and first chapter of my story, The Amulet of Duality, here on Scribble Hub. It's a fantasy romance that follows Solena, a Healer torn between light and shadow who inherits necormantic powers and a goddess' prophecy. This was...
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