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I get what you're saying. As of now I'm polishing the five chapters before I publish the sixth. Hopefully once the next chapter is posted, I'll have most of the clarity and pacing issues hammered out. So anyone that decides to read it can have a smoother time doing so. :blob_ninja:

Recently I've been writing this Fantasy/Dark Fantasy novel. Quite frankly I've been having fun in doing so, but I feel like it's not a story to be published. I might just be a harsh critic of myself, but overall it seems like it's lacking in character depth and pacing. So I'd like some feedback...

Hello, I've come here to throw some slop I wrote for fun at your feet. The slop is Fantasy/Dark Fantasy. I'm not too sure if the pacing is right, and I feel it's all over the place. But I might just be a harsh critic to myself. Let me know. - 7,798 Words - 5 Chapters - Each Chapter lasts...

Not too sure if you're still doing feedback. If you are, I'd like to see your opinion on my novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1147459/shadows-of-farabane/ It's still a work in progress and only has 4 chapters so far. Though I've been adding a chapter daily.