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The three stories above, I'm sorry but I don't have extra time now to review them 🙇‍♂️. I just got thrown tons of school works and that devil (thesis) beckoned again after the long holiday. Again I'm sorry! As for those that gave me chance to give feedback, thank you! May your lives be good...

Its alright! I mainly reviewed the story through CRT lens and a bit of feminism. I didn't looked at the grammar and sentence structure like greyblob did. I am too lazy lol.

Currently, catching up with Mirror Legacy. While pausing from The Divine Diary.

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Oh damn another vet'ran! From the moment I read your prologue's poem I already knew that your story would be good! At first I got confused with character cuz the one in your cover was a black woman with curly black hair, yet in the first one it was tanned blonde. I read your synopsis and find...

It's an ecchi and cousin-cousin tandem!? My imaginations are going wild. We might be both sloths, but you're a different one! Anyways, you're chapter one is good but I think it's too packed with information. From grannie's death, family problem, Min and Hal's past relationships, too full! I...

Finished one, another one tomorrow. Its Literature and the Environment. I scored high in the multiple choice cuz our teacher basically gave away the answers in her reviewer, I don't know about the essay though. Thanks!

Making the chapter titles into poem is such a good idea! Let me note that down. As for right now I'm not doing things like that, I just wrote whatever comes to mind.

What does the sloth say?

I'll take the last spot. I don't know if you still remembered, you also reviewed my last book, i dropped it. See if I improved a bit, lol. It has only 2 chapters for now. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2269566/the-unceasing-soul/

I'll review you two later after my exam, wish me ultra goodluck.

I'm not new though. I just hibernated for two years lol.

Nah

No one stopping me so another one, heights like everybody else. When I stand next to the window or balcony from third floor or higher my feet goes on flood spree that probably could supply water to a small village in Africa, just kidding.

Damn why is my feedback thread filled with veteran writers? How could I challenge my reviewing skills, lol.

I cracked two or three laughs from your story, be proud. It has a really promising start and a character. Though zombie apocalypse is overdone, mixing it with girlish antics is something novel. Aren't you the one aligned with Satan, are you jumping ships? Lol. The pokemon one is funny too...

It's not the place I live in, its the mind I was given doing all the anxious shits within. Oh rhymes

Another irrational fear is people I don't know, what if they suddenly pulled a gun or blade at me?