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Hey, I know this is a late reply, but I think you misunderstood something. Alex was the one abandoning his sister, not the other way around. If you go back to Chapter 1, you’ll see that it’s from Alex’s POV. I realize now that I might not have made it clear enough, so that’s on me not your fault.

Hey buddy, actually, Alex is not the MC—Tyson is. But thanks! I was thinking exactly the same thing about Chapter 0, and I realize now that starting the POV from Alex was probably a mistake on my part. As for 'Tempest,' I was planning to introduce it in Chapter 0, but it would have felt like...

Hey everyone, I’ve recently rewritten the first three chapters of my novel, Search of Tempest, and I’d love to hear your thoughts on it. Let me know what you think about the story, pacing, and characters. Any feedback is appreciated! link...

Hey everyone, I’ve just released the first three chapters of my novel. I’ve rewritten my novel to improve the pacing, character depth, and overall storytelling. I’ve taken feedback into account and made major improvements—but I need fresh eyes to see if it truly works. Your thoughts—whether...