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Hello @Glitched I would love your feedback on my entry for J-Novel LN competition that I have posted on here. Since the competition window has ended, I won't be able to modify my entry, but it would be nice to hear some feedback. While some of my readers have commented, it's not really in a...

Thank you for your esteemed feedback. It seems you understand the premise and idea of my work, despite its incongruencies. Perhaps if I labelled the first chapter as prologue instead you could forgive me for the abruptness of the regression. I'd say my theme fits perfectly for the Japanese...

Thanks for taking the time to read the first chapter. My book is mostly a slice-of-life, with baseball being a small part of it. I don't think I actually write about a game until my 19th chapter, while everything revolves around Ken and his family in the meantime. Either way, thanks for your...

Hi, if you have some time would you mind giving some feedback on my novel? Major League System. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/946547/major-league-system/

Hi there, I was hoping that you might spare the time to look at my novel? Sports type novel that I'm writing for a competition: Major League System https://www.scribblehub.com/series/946547/major-league-system/

Hi Everyone. I have been writing my new book for a few weeks now for a competition that is due by 31st January. I've posted on a few platforms, but I'm lacking any feedback, hence why I'm here. If you have the time/inclination, would you mind giving my book a brief read and posting your...