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I like reading novels, and it's not often I drop them but this one really makes no sense. I posted the screen shots of the novel. have a look it's not that I don't have empathy but if someone doesn't want my help, insult me and even hurts me , why should I help? Ohhhh she's cursed, so frikin what?

I dont think it is because of ego, like I said 2 chapter ago he humiliated someone for a petty reason. the man is not cursed, only the girl. The MC was never cursed, he has a system that identified it and give him a solution for everything.

recently I started reading a novel called "Museum of the deadly beasts". I read about 12-13 chapters and really enjoyed the novel until one scene that made me drop it without hesitation. I dont understand how some authors think and I am not judging anyone, as different people have different...

Thank you , looks like I'm going to need that

Thank you for the tips

Hahha that sounds like a great idea

Thank you

Ohhh lol , you caught me of guard with those replies , ? ? yea it's cool

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Well mainly some of the fellow writers told me that I made the chat a little too enthusiastic and that is not how I write a chat so I wanted some more opinions , maybe I could modifie it a bit so the readers can enjoy it more

Yea , I really enjoy writing this novel

Right, so in my last post I asked for some tips , the dialogue that I wrote is in the 5th chapter and I want to mention that the novel is about a game developer, the stream chat is and interaction between a streamer and the audience about the game...

Thank you, the thing is I already started writing, I'm at the 6th chapter right now , I have a few readers and people who support me and I wanted to make the story better. I know right now my story is not the best but I want to improve and bring my readers more enjoyable chapters Thank you for...

Hello , I am writing a story for my first time and I need some tips about how to make a funny dialogue between the streamer and the audience and also how long should it be? Should I make a single chapter dedicated to the stream or make it shorter and add it to the chapter like : Meanwhile in...