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Hey. A bit weird since I already asked you for a review before, but I kind of wanted a second look at how my rewrite was going so far. I've reworked up to chapter 4 of the novel, and before I continue, I wanted to see if it was any good. Also, if my first three chapters aren't so bad that you...

Sorry, this reply took me so long. I've been busy this week because I have a ceremony for my club next week. First off, thank you for actually reading and reviewing my work. I genuinely didn't expect anyone to reply to this thread and I definitely didn't expect a full breakdown of your thoughts...

Btw this is not a hardcore ecchi or anything. Cover is mostly to get people interested. As you might've gotten from the title, it's been a long time since I came on here and asked for some feedback. Seeing as I'm coming back to writing my novel now that I actually have time to write again, I...

Btw this is not a hardcore ecchi or anything. Cover is mostly to get people interested. As you might've gotten from the title, it's been a long time since I came on here and asked for some feedback. Seeing as I'm coming back to writing my novel now that I actually have time to write again, I...

Alright I'm around 40 chapters deep into my novel, but it's never too late to look for some feedback from people. I want to hear some opinions on what I've written so far and in return, I'm happy to go through someone else's work. All I ask is that you finish the first two chapters and from...

Hello and thank you for showing interest in my post. As the title says, I want someone to read my story and tell me how far they got and what you didn't like about it. I've already gotten feedback on the start of my story and I'm in the process of reworking it, but since I'm doing that I...

Thank you for your feedback and sorry to bother you so soon after. I reworked the first chapter and wanted to see if you could look it over once again. In all honesty, I've got no clue how to actually start a story and I didn't even have a story when I wrote that chapter. Rereading what I wrote...

Not sure if you're still doing this, but I'd definitely be interested in hearing what you've got to say. Not to brag, but I think I'm low-key cooking up with what I've got. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1135540/the-revival-of-the-vampire-empress/ Don't expect you to read the whole thing...

Just want to hear what works and doesn't work. Please don't go easy on me and tell me what you actually think. I mainly want to know what about my writing would be a turn-off for potential readers and what aspects of my writing are good. I'm willing to go back and rework previous...

Hello. I've been silently writing on here for a few months and I figured it was time to interact with the community a bit. I want to hear some opinions on what I've written so far and in return, I'm happy to go through someone else's work. All I ask is that you finish the first two chapters...