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  1. Dearest_Violet

    First Chapter Analysis

    No worries, what you've said already really helps a lot! I do need to improve my writing, I'll be the first to admit that haha.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Thank you very much for the feedback! It's much appreciated.
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Thank you very much for your feedback! Your insight is most helpful!
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    Technology

    I personally don't think we would be better off without any one piece of technology, but it would be interesting if guns weren't possible to be built. The world would be very cool with light weight augmented reality ocular devices I think.
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    Best Single Player (Offline) Games?

    Do those work? I heard the government over there really doesn't like them.
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    Guess something about the guy before.

    Modern Anime Style perhaps? Q: "What is my favorite character trope?"
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    Writing Types of Characters You Like Writing About.

    Oh, I have a little trouble with this one as I can't seem to be able to make their clumsiness organic. That's certainly one of the better troubles to have. Oh! That's rather specific. Is it that they are hard to write because you don't understand them or something else?
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    Recommendations Kingdom Building with female MCs (That you absolutely recommend)

    It's an old manga but I will never pass up a chance to vouch for "Sengoku Komachi Kuroutan: Noukou Giga"!
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    Your opinion after investing your feelings to a character and the author just end up killing them

    I feel as though for stories there are certain characters that simply keep me reading. For these characters I find it really hard to continue if the author makes it clear that they won't be coming back unless they truly give their death meaning and lasting impact. Otherwise fair game I suppose.
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    If you're still doing this I would love to hear your thoughts! Click HERE! Thank you very much for your time!
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    Writing Types of Characters You Like Writing About.

    I am curious as to what types of characters an author would find most enjoyable to write in their story. And perhaps compare that with characters that you find it difficult to write but include anyway.
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    filtering!!! wat u think?

    I appreciate more prose if the situation requires the description to be impactful, but I understand that too much prose can bog a story down like nothing else. Like everything in life, use it in moderation!
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    "Just call them Zombies!"

    Yes, the first usage of the word recorded was around the 1800s, that being said the image of zombies they had at that time were no doubt far different from the horde minded modern zombies that today's culture has popularized.
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    this internet markup language uses > for quotes

    >Be me >Use md for quotes instead of quotations >Forget to change format on my research submission >Supervisor is a boomer >OhNo.gif Why has the internet done this to me?
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    Recommendations Looking for manapunk light\webnovels.

    This sounds like Arcane haha.
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    I have a chapter up!

    Would you like a new reading site? The community has a discord where a lot of the prior chapters have been translated and put onto a nice looking website. The website seems a bit incomplete but it does have illustrations and a really dark background! I'll leave the discord invite if you need...
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    I need to know, why do people like this?

    I'm not too familiar with the style of novel you're depicting, but I've found that people are strange and like strange things. Though just because they entertain the medium and genre doesn't mean they'll let it impact their daily life. Killing people in video games don't make people murderers...
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    Civil War

    Oh I'd love a historical isekai like that one really good japanese manga! Though I wouldn't change any aspect about the civil war besides the isekaied person himself.
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    Please could I have feedback my synopsis and story.

    I'd like a more descriptive synopsis if possible, this doesn't give me much to latch onto unfortunately.
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    "Just call them Zombies!"

    Personally I have no qualms about calling them zombies, but if the setting is not modern there could be a disconnect, given that the popularity of the term 'zombies' is a product of pop culture if I am remembering correctly.
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