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I like micro and biology, but I'd prefer each name to work as a name by itself. For example, "Dick" and "Tracie". Yes, I know that's terrible but it does illustrate the point. I need two names which work alone and together have a quite different meaning. -Kidd "Max" and "Well" almost works...

At least it can't get worse.

Hi, I've also posted this on Discord, so apologies if you've seen it there. I have two robots in my story. They are exactly alike. They roll around and do stuff. One robot is "seen" by the reader in the story early on. The second is not "seen" until the second half of the book. So I want their...

The lie was out of the water and he couldn't toss it back in. Should "of" be in there?

Nah, more original please. Try again.

That's a little harsh on the Chinese. Great but not original. Offenheimer I believe. Nope, not a metaphor. Okay, use a metaphor to describe the state of your kitchen, your closet, your love life, or almond joy ice cream. Yeah, I know almond joy ice cream is heaven only sweeter. I think you...

Hit me with a great metaphor.

Hi, Tell me why you are on Scribble Hub. What is it that you are looking for in story? --Kidd

I think peanut butter should be banned from desserts. No peanut butter cookies, definitely no peanut butter in ice cream, and why would anyone ever put peanut better in pie? NO! I SAY NO! NO PEANUT BUTTER IN DESSERTS!

I think you should read my book.

I've collected the feed back and changed the synopsis. Here it is. (BTW also got some hugely useful feedback from RR. Thanks, people.) My banner hasn't changed, but the new synopsis is too long to fit on the banner. I'll need to work on a shortened version. New Synopsis: Some say there was a...

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Some say there was time long ago when the dragons were wise and good, when they lived in peace with humanity. And Magic flowed among the people like a river at flood. Magical people were born into every family: healers, wind-whisperers, movers . . . The dragons, also magical, were scholars and...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/588059/hunted/

Dawn First Light The First Dawn Eden's Light

I'd like to see this done in "tags" Right now each author can only assign 25 tags. I think there should be two tag lists. The first which talks about the story itself such as "fantasy" or "strong romantic subplot" etc, and the second which is solely concerned with violence and sex. Then the...

I agree with those who think it should be an entirely different category. --Kidd

I read your chapter. There is not really anything wrong, it's that you have so much untapped potential there. My suggestion may seem a bit, well undoable, but I find that first chapters are best written after the book is complete. In other words, the first chapter of a story should hint at the...

Okay, if religion was allowed...can I suggest that we each promote our work by making fun of some well known public figure. I'm think Trump, Musk, the woman who was PM for like 3 days in the UK. Really, there are so many good choices these days. Here, I'll start... Hey Donald, wanna trade? I'll...

Stories are important because they warn us. Think of Rumpelstiltskin. This is a story about a woman who bargains away her first born child. In other words, we are being warned, "read the fine print in the contract." Or Snow White and the 7 dwarfs which cautions against tempting things. "Don't...