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You have a point yes, but like Anon noted above, depends entirely on the demographic. I myself, as a traditional reader first rather than a web novel reader, quite enjoy "Using my brain to speculate" as well as "Wait for [the author's] crumbs of information to make sense." As you put it...

And when is the next game

You aren't getting a 9 for smut, you're getting a 9 for writing quality. If I calculate everything else, it's more a 5 or 4.

Well. It's something. Not necessarily something I'd read personally, but it's something. I can only really judge on the writing level, since the story is pretty much non existent. Overall writing level is on par with quite a few actual writers I read, so there's nothing lacking there. I...

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Hmm. Well, the writing style reminds me of light novels, which aren't inherently a bad thing. In terms of story though, you are having just about the same problem as everyone else here. There's nothing making me turn the next page except for the fact that this is well within my reading...

I see. I haven't read any of your other books, so I'll take your word for it.

Well hmm. The writing itself is pretty good, there are no issues with it. However, in terms of story, the words aren't really captivating, and there is no wondering going on. There are a few occasions where I could see that you have actually created some sort of world rather than a book...

Hmm. Well, the premise is interesting, and it's ever so slightly captivating. It's pretty good objectively, although subjectively I myself probably wouldn't finish It. I'd read it, and probably stay for 50 or so chapters, but any more needs a decent increase in chapter quality. If you want...

It's good, although a disagreement between your writing style and my reading preferences prevents me from enjoying it the way others might. In terms of story, you have the same problem of captivation. The premise is intriguing, but not captivating. I could read the next chapter, but it doesn't...

Well, it's alright. The beginning baby pov was a bit jarring, but a nice quirk. Not a lot of people write the way the character would think like at the time. As for story itself, it's just okay. I didn't really feel like reading the next chapter, although that is probably because of my very...

You need to step back, uninstall anything you use to write, remove Google docs from your bookmarks, and just relax. Writing 20 books is crazy, especially if you did it without breaks as it looks like here. You need to chill, live life without thinking about your next story. if you can't stop...

So I've seen a bunch of these lately, and might as well add my thoughts to the lot. A notice first. Take any review I make with a pinch of salt, Most times, I am just as skilled as writing as you are, if not worse. With that out of the way, you know how things work, you post a link to your...

It's alright, but there are a few times where you are using more dialogue than prose, and more prose than dialogue, which reads a bit weirdly.

But it's funny, the 25th exodus actually led to Qidian losing money.

I only really name characters if they are referenced multiple times. If they only appear once in the entire book, I'm probably gonna leave them nameless. If they appear several times a chapter, Im gonna name them, even if they disappear by the time the next chapter comes around.

SAO is pretty okay yeah, I still find myself watching a few episodes here and there whenever I need to get inspired for something along the same line.