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  1. Boundless

    What can you say about my* two protagonists?

    Just for the record, yes, I wrote my story to "tell" more than to "show," I know that, and I will say sorry in advance if that bothers you. I just want to ask about my character's personality, judgement, and morals, if they're likeable or not. And if you had time, you can add advice on how to...
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    My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?

    From what I've gathered through various forums (especially in JP ones) telling the narrative is preferred with a little side of showing. I researched it further and found that they tend to focus more on plot points, world building, and with a little addition to "like" faster updates. Is there...
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    Story Feedback

    Hi everyone! Would you mind giving my book a read and give a constructive feedback? If you enjoy it, I'd really appreciate your support to help it reach more readers! You can leave a review, too...
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    open for commission... i guess

    I am open for commission. it depends on what kind you want (book cover, character illustration) as long as the price are negotiable. I suck at making bg so most likely I only accept works with minimal to no bg details/works. cash first before i submit the finish product (ofc it's alr done) btw...
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    Vol. 2 cover rework. what do you think?

    New Version: Old Version: I am the artist btw, in case you're wondering ?
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    Redemption Arc (I guess): Chapter Review 3.0 (?)

    After several weeks of busy schedule, summer break finally came just yesterday. Now that I have time to adjust my first chapter, I want you guys to review it. (Here we go again ?) I changed my secondary FMC so that she won't be overshadowed by the primary MC, and made my MC even weirder as...
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    feedback, feedback, feedback.

    rate from 1-10 how impactful the first few chapters is. or check synopsis if you want to. i need insights for the contest that i joined, also to improve my writing skills further. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474537/the-ability-to-shift-anything-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/
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    need ratings :) for research purposes

    rate from 1-10 how impactful the first few chapter is. or check synopsis if you want to. i need insights for the contest that i joined, also to improve my writing skills further. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474537/the-ability-to-shift-anything-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/
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    Review Swap: Someone's mad because I mistakenly posted it on the wrong thread, so here you go! I did the right thing ?

    Nah, I simply want review swap. First 5 chapters, leave a review on review section after that, and I'll do the same. A reasonable deal? Of course, it is. ?Click here? to redirect you to my story page.
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    First 4 Chapters Review Swap

    I read your first 4 chapters, you do mine as well, and leave reviews after that. Fair deal? Yes it is! ?Here's my story's link? (drop urs too) pic for entertainment purposes
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    J-Novel Club submission

    anyone who's gonna participate in JNC original LN contest here?
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    I don't know if I know how to write a story or not

    Yeah, you read that right. Sometimes, I always thought that my plot was well-structured, but everytime I read it, it feels like it lack emotions. I wrote this second story of mine, revised all of it for the sake of feeling its emotions. But no matter how I do it, it feels like it is lacking...
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    Power-Shifting (i'll summarize the title because it's too long) Feedback

    Please give me a feedback about my very first novel, My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World. After Volume 1 (which had 20-25 chapters), I plan to translate it to japanese and upload it on syosetu, hoping that it would be adapted as a Light Novel. I want feedbacks so that...
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    official unfinished book cover on "My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World"

    I would like to show you my original unfinishedfanart, at the same time, promoting my novel HAHAHA. These 2 characters, Shin Soru and Mitsuha Reika, are the main characters on my novel "My Power-Shifting Ability is Convenient Even in Another World" and my first book 1 cover (made by myself, cuz...
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