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So I been coming back to it for some reason and still isn't really sure if it hooking or boring. I would like to know outsiders opinions on where does it feel like it drags or where it seems interesting and engaging. Thank you...

I been working too long on the first chapter to the point the words litterally blur and It would really help me seeing some outside perpective. Thank you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SaswMMFH9yNSpvL0oVLLT2b0y28S_uOOWVcenQfamF4/edit?usp=drivesdk

Hi, I would appreciate feedback for the beginning of my story, to see if it's uninteresting or unengaging. Like that, I could change it before I go too far. Thank you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MhZ6-__ZHrIDEkZWndKolcYXOZlVvzVBHttP8p03-Ow/edit#heading=h.qbaa9e1uswba

I remember reading a log time ago a story with this concept, sadly it was dropped however I thought the idea was very cool. Is there any stories with a similar concept?

Was planning on starting a novel, and I wanted to make sure it didn't suck. I will appreciate if someone could read at least, read a little of my old novel for their opinion so I won't commit same mistakes on my new one and also can improve the old one. Ifor the moment it has only five chapters...

Would someone you click on this cover?