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I've lost confidence in my writing. Reading what I wrote, I begin worrying that my prose is confusing and doesn't paint the scene the way I wanted. I know I shouldn't disrectpect the readers' intelligence, but I can't help but worry. TL;DR - Do you get confused reading this piece of trash I...

do you mind filtering in the prose? if you don't know what filtering is: it is when the author writes the situation happening in the novel through the characters eyes, using unnecessary words, instead of describing the situation directly to the reader. for example. this is a scene with...

First, thank you for clicking this thread. I would like to ask for some feedback on my weeb novel, New World Paradise. A chapter is about 10,000 words in length, and the prose is garbage, but I hope it's enjoyable. Thank you again. PS: asking for feedback is really stressful, for some reason....

Have you ever had that feeling when you want to convey something to the reader but struggle to find the right sentences to do it, worrying whether the flow of the paragraph or chapter was good enough? I know that a writer should not underestimate the readers' intelligence by dumbing things down...

read the title. which way do you write: full relative clause 1. Everyone who is living in this village suffers from insomnia. or if you speak the wrong version of english american english 1.1 Everyone that is living in this village suffers from insomnia. vs reduced relative clause 2...