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  1. radraccoon

    How bad a thing can a good person do?

    I was thinking of having my characters engage in a little bit of detour where one of the heroines, who has been kind and loving until that point, meets a man from her past. He has a family and seems like a nice person but beforehand he'd done some nasty things (ran a cult, brainwashed children...
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    How do you write like you want to write?

    I recently received the criticism that my writing doesn't read like I'm someone who enjoys writing. When I asked the person to explain further, they hemmed and hawed about they were just offering constructive criticism and that I shouldn't be so argumentative. (I took this to mean they were...
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    What is a prologue?

    What makes a prologue a prologue as opposed to just chapter 1?
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    I need to change the terms for things. Please help with brainstorming.

    The world my story takes place in is divided in two parts: one that gets a lot of sun and one that doesn't (there's a whole thing about how this occurs, none of which is explained in the book as it ties to that world's creation myth, which isn't explained until well into the second book). I've...
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    I finished my first book here on Scribble Hub.

    Now what should I do? What did you other writers do when you finished?
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    Out of Place Vernacular

    I've seen multiple people criticize the The Rings of Power series for having characters say "okay." They argue that it's a very modern vernacular (it dates back to the Victorian Era) that destroys any audience immersion. (I suppose they'd feel it more authentic if there were lots of "thees"...
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    It is done!

    I just finished revising the final chapter of my book. Tomorrow I'll schedule the last few chapters for posting and then ... and then ... it's all over?
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    Would it be okay to Hobbit the ending?

    I just finished revising the chapter that was the ending in my first draft. The protagonist uses a spell that renders him unconscious but he hopes will deal a mortal blow to the enemy. Then I picked up in an epilogue where apparently much went on while he was out, only some of which is...
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    Trying to come up with a cover.

    I've been told that my current cover, with the battle plans text and building on it, is too bland to draw in readers. However I felt it was a good indicator of the humor and tone of the story. I was advised to emphasize waifus, but there's only two women in the book and neither is presented as...
  10. radraccoon

    Happy Valentine's Day!

    Big shock that I draw raccoons.
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