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  1. ThatRandomWriter

    Bloodline Purifcation/Cultivation, does this work? (Warning, very long IMO)

    Hello, I am writing this from my phone. Most of this post will be therefore copy-pasted from my personal notes. I am the writer of Ultima NPC (although yes I upload very rarely. I do apologize for that). My question is simply this, what does everyone think of the idea for 'cultivation' that I...
  2. ThatRandomWriter

    Feedback on my Story

    I posted this awhile ago, but didn't receive any comments other than a single reaction. Which I am grateful for. Maybe posting this at a different time will help. I would like some feedback on my story, the first part of which is linked below. Even if you only read a single chapter I still...
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    I would like some feedback on my story (Ultima NPC)

    I um, am not sure what to put here, other than saying that part 2 is currently being worked on, but going forward I would like to hear criticisms given to the story. So part 1 is here and um, part 2, all three chapters of it are also available for critique...
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