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  1. abysslover12

    Feedback request —the uncrowned paragon ( survival, escape, and complex power system)(please i really need it)

    Hey folks, I’d love some feedback on my story no holding back i want an honest one. The premise is simple but intense: John dies in our world and wakes up in the body of a thirteen‑year‑old, forced into an organization that trains kids into weapons. The system is layered and complex, and...
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