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  1. oussama_schrodinger

    Stuck on something.

    Currently, I am writing the ending of Volume 04. Almost all of the endings I wrote so far have been… sad. I don’t want to change the current one, but I’m worried it might seem like I only write that kind of ending, or that it might start to feel a bit cliché. What would you do if you were in my...
  2. oussama_schrodinger

    Please add Volume option. It's a mess.

    I reached volume 03, and now it's a giant mess of chapters. we need grouping.
  3. oussama_schrodinger

    Interesting Story Feedback.

    I want special feedback. Since I wrote three volumes, I want to see if I have ever improved. Two chapters from vol 1 and two from 3 to see if I evolved. I would appreciate any criticism. Thank you in advance.
  4. oussama_schrodinger

    Chapter 18 is published. What do you think about the story so far?

    As many suggested, you can't judge a book by its first chapter. So I waited until this time to request some feedback. I'm currently halfway writing Vol. 2 so I need some steering. What do you think? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2044869/eunit-the-blue-angels-of-death/
  5. oussama_schrodinger

    HI! I'm a new writer. can someone review my story and give me his opinion about it?

    This is second attempt. For some reason, the first post didn't allow me to post links lol. My whole link glitched. Here it is: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2044869/eunit-the-blue-angels-of-death/ This is a fast paced action story in modern/dystopian settings.
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