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  1. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    Need feedback only on this chapter 1

    Hey there! I'm back once again to ask for feedback on my first chapter, but what's different this time is that it isn't a draft; it's a fixed first chapter I've finally decided on. What I want as feedback is simple, 1) Rate it, out of 10. 2) Tell me your general impression of the chapter...
  2. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    Need feedback on this first chapter draft. (Experimental)

    Okay, this isn't a new first chapter draft. It's the seventh draft of my first chapter, which I wrote a while ago. At first, I dismissed it cuz I felt it had too many problems as an isekai story first chapter. Still, I'm the author, so I don't know what this first chapter will seem like from...
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    Is This Chapter 1 Good Enough? (Part 2)

    To know the entire context of the matter, check out part one of this thread. Is this chapter 1 good enough? Basically, I want feedback on my first chapter draft before I put it away as a polished chapter. I have checked and read it several times, made whatever Improvements I could think of...
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    Chunnibyou God Of Supremacy's Anime fanart sketches Before he had ascended to godhood.

    I was cleaning my house and found all the sketches I drew when I was into anime a lot. So I thought I should put them here to pass the time (before I put them back where I found them) It started when I saw Instagram reels where people were drawing Anime character sketches on screen. I thought I...
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    Has this happened to you too?

    I was walking home silently as always, but then a story's scene flashed through my mind. I remember that the scene was very emotional and that it had quite the impact on me when I saw it, but I just can't remember where that scene is from or it's details! I can't remember the series name not...
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    Is this chapter 1 good enough?

    Before writing the rest of the draft, I thought I should polish the first chapter itself. This first chapter has fried my brain too much compared to the rest of the story. I have checked and read it several times, made whatever Improvements I could think of. Before I put it away as a...
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    Is it even Possible for AI assistants like ChatGPT to generate entire long Novels?

    Before we start, I'm not talking about AI-assisted stories or machine translations; I'm talking about Original AI-generated novels. And the topic is AI Assistants, not the AI in general. I was scrolling through YouTube and found a video about how the Webnovel platform is filled with novels...
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    Oneshot Novels Market Research: Need advice (cuz I'm ignorant)

    So, here's the thing. I have been restructuring my novel to make it more suitable as a web novel. but the more I improve it and the better I try to plan it out, the more ideas come to my mind. So I think it's gonna take a while before I start writing again. But I was starting to get...
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    The Awareness Series Part 1: The Mystery of Horrible One Punch Man Season 3—Pikachu Monster Mutation

    Avarice was living his life like he always did. He sat lazily on his sofa, with his laptop in his hands as he continued writing his novel in peace. But it was rare for him to stay this leisurely at home, because this time was supposed to be his working hours. The curtains of the room were...
  10. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    AI Protection Act. Discrimination against AI

    Disclaimer: This is NOT a rage bait thread. If you are here for that then kindly go somewhere else. I've been hearing this chant about say no to AI usage in image creation and it's getting weirder and weirder these days. Pikachu masses are pointing at almost anything that had even the faintest...
  11. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    Prologue chapters, how important are they?

    Okay so, I'm in the process of restructuring my novel to make it more marketable and was doing research on that front. Based on what I've read about the topic and the research I've done, one of the most important factors for web novel popularity is the beginning of the story and the early...
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    What's your opinion on the main story of Duet Night Abyss?

    Duet Night Abyss (DNA) is a new RPG game that came out only around 28th October this year and it's gonna have it's first major update around the end of December and will be available on Steam as well after that time. I like RPGs and exploration based games a lot and I primarily played games...
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    Physical drawings V/S Digital drawings

    My physical drawings 2 years ago: My 2nd attempt at drawing digitally on my PC: Rate my skills \10 NOTE: I didn't draw beyond that part cuz the drawing was only getting more horrible
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    Option to delete a Thread

    I've noticed it that there isn't an option to delete a thread that you have already created. But I find this disadvantageous for both SH and the users who are new (old users will probably benefit as well). Since the total amount of threads will only increase, it will become more burdensome for...
  15. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    Writing Help me fix my bad writing style

    I was initially gonna ignore it but too many people have complained about my writing style so I've decided to fix it. NOTE: English isn't my first language (isn't second language either) and everything about my writing is developed from the web novels that I've read. So, the origin of my...
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    Editing Why does this keep happening?

    So, I mainly use Google Docs to write my chapter drafts and copy-paste the text at the time of uploading. But here's the problem: As you can see, there is no gap in the part: -Adrian looked at the result of his spell while still sitting leisurely. And a soft smile slowly appeared on his...
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    What should I do about this Paradox called Book Cover?

    So... here's the problem: I am a new author and started writing mostly as a hobby. But now I feel that my work is good enough for commercialization. So I was thinking of commercializing my work after I publish around 50 chapters. But the problem is book cover. My current book cover is made...
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    That time I got scammed by AI

    This is the story of how I created my first Novel. One day, I was lying down on bed and reading novels when suddenly, an idea flashed through my mind. 'Lets write my own web novel' this was my idea. But I knew nothing about writing novels or writing in general, so I asked Chat GPT a simple...
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    What is a normal chapter release schedule for a web novel?

    So, here's the thing. It's my first time writing a novel and I am determined to complete this novel. My novel will probably have more than 500 chapter and it could even go on for more than 1000 chapters. What is the normal chapter release schedule that I should follow? I mean, everywhere there...
  20. Avarice_Of_The_Seven

    Looking for feedback on my dual protagonist reincarnation fantasy novel.

    This is my first novel that I have ever written so feedback is appreciated. The story features two different protagonists with completely different personalities. They are reincarnated under different circumstances in a morally grey world. the story switches between light and heavy tone...
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