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  1. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    So basically, I'm planning on releasing a new novel which I've been writing recently. (it's named iterate and I've linked the poster below) but my question here is. The first chapter turned out to be 6,788words long. I've tried trimming it or shortening it some aspects, which made it Haruka’s...
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    Wanna read a dark fantasy story?

    I've released my novel (again) recently after a rework I want people to actually see/read my novel. If you guys have the time please do read it. And I would greatly appreciate it if you guys gave any feedback. I mean "Any" feedback works. I've linked the story and gave the synopsis below. Here...
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    Assistance for a "Re-Release"

    So basically, last time I released a novel named "The World Without Mercy" I'm thinking that I've rewritten majority of the original work, I'll start releasing the novel with a full update. New cover art, new chapter, and a full rework. I've gave the new cover art under here. I'd say it captures...
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    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    So I've been recently writing a new novel. It's about time travel a genre I adore yet never had the energy to make. But I was listening music then a came up with this idea. It's basically a time travel novel centered around the mc who can only travel back in time at a specific time.(which is...
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    Update vs Republish?

    Okay so basically. I've been upto some repolishing on my novel(after some Ai slop ruined it) I didn't intentionally use ai. the app I wrote in had it prebuild for spell checks and it changed phrasing so it made my novel unreadable. But now that I've started repolishing it. I've changed a bit too...
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    Music composing for novels?

    Basically I make music as a side "hobby" and thought about making music to set the atmosphere for a novel I'm working on. But if i did where would i upload it and the main question, would people actually listen to them?
  7. Esden-Noir

    Rate these images, or admire them?

    Recently made some images for my novel, rate them if y'all like. Or just admire. tell me if somethings wrong. And even better ask me what they do/who they are.
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    Actually coherent criticism?

    I've wrote my novel for about a year now, and in the process uploaded it to a lot of websites.(including this platform) but where ever I upload it there's never actually coherent criticism. People will say it's good/bad And that's it. In order to improve you'd need to actually be pointed out...
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    Character illustration for my novel

    So the two boys(young men as I'd call em) are the mc's of the story who are orphans. while the woman is the orphanage master—head nun (well she isn't wearing nunly clothing but idk I'm tired) the white haired boy is sylas(the mc) and the black haired boy is kael(the second protagonist) idk what...
  10. Esden-Noir

    Feedback Request For TWWM

    I've been serializing my dark fantasy story for about a month now, and I'm excited to share it with readers who love deep world-building, intricate plots, realistic characters, and a truly unforgiving world. Synopsis: In a world where shadows dread the darkness, Sylas was raised by Mercy in...
  11. Esden-Noir

    Looking For feedback/criticism

    I've been serializing my dark fantasy story for about a month now, and I'm excited to share it with readers who love deep world-building, intricate plots, realistic characters, and a truly unforgiving world. Synopsis: In a world where shadows dread the darkness, Sylas was raised by Mercy in her...
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