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Seeing as how I've been working on the opening of Chapter 3 of Duskfall, and doing so introduces one of that series' main, recurring, antagonists it's gotten me thinking. Who are some of the most memorable villains my fellow authors here have created for their own stories and why were those...

I've got a bit of the opening of The Elarian Chronicles: Duskfall (Chapter 3) typed up and would like some feedback on the presentation and characterization of the character presented here. As for the feedback I'm looking for, I'm particularly curious about what kind of feelings he evokes in...

:blob_highfive: Just broke 100 readers overall. Finally in the triple digits now, and I wouldn't have gotten here without those of you who've taken the time to add my stories to your reading lists. This is the first real milestone in my career as an author. I'm grateful for everything, and...

I've finally gotten around to drafting up the (actual) blurb/synopsis for Aestelle Nocte, but would like a bit of feedback on it before I actually update the series with it. Does it deliver the hook well? How well does it set the stage? How well did I nail the five main questions: (Who, What...

After a fair bit of consideration, I'm opting to open my own critiques thread for those who might be interested in getting thorough feedback and constructive critique on their stories. With my writing schedule, I will only be able to address a few full critiques every month at best, and I do...

Alright, I've finished up the quick rough drafts for the two most popular answers from Chapter 2's question ["Who is at the door?"]. All of which was received via DM's on Discord, or direct in-person votes from a few of my invested beta-readers, but the results were torn between two options...

As the thread title suggests, I'd like to know what some of the rest of you do in your off-hours. Basically, the time that you're not writing. How do some of you spend it? Do you watch TV? Movies? Anime? Play games? etc etc? Any other hobbies or interests that fill those hours that you'd like to...

As the thread title implies, I'd like to get some feedback on this opening to the fight sequence in The Elarian Chronicles, Chapter 2.2. So yes, this is both a sneak peek at the upcoming chapter release, and a quick chance to give some feedback before the chapter gets published / released this...

Just had another idea pop into my head for a story. I don't have the time to actually write it at present with my other active projects, but I'm still curious if there happens to be any interest in the premise. The basic idea is a cross-over between Mech-Warrior, Lancer (The TTRPG), and Zoids...

In compliance with the Forum rules, this thread is being tagged 18+, even though it does not feature any explicit sexual content (No explicit sex in the scene, just a detailed make-out bit and implicit direction towards sex). While personally, I'd say the scene would fall under the R-rating...

For those who may be interested, or those who are already reading it, Chapter 1.2 for Duskfall (The Elarian Chronicles - Volume 1) just dropped and brings the total chapter length up to 9,051 words (divided into two parts for easier reading). The legend begins, as does the journey. I'd greatly...

As the thread title suggests, I'd like a critique on the aerial battle in my series, Aethara: The King's Path that occurs in Chapter 2. The sequence is broken into three parts here. The Opening, The Assault, and the Climax. While this is a nice chunk of the chapter, it is not the complete...

Adding this thread for my other story here since Episode 1: Chapter 1 just dropped a couple of hours ago. It's a beast of a chapter to be sure, as per the standard for my prose landing just shy of the higher end of my average (6500 words), and I do hope it delivers on everything that I've...

Okay. That new story, formally called Project H has a formal title now; released with Chapter 1 (as promised). The series is called Aestelle Nocte, and Chapter 1 is live. A beast of a chapter nearing the higher end of my average length (6500 words) that is also the first time I've written any...

My as-of-yet untitled light harem rom-com just dropped on Scribble-Hub. Called Project 'H' for the time being (pending an actual title), the story is a light harem-genre romantic comedy with a splash of science-fiction and filled with nerd-culture and otaku-culture references (for those who can...

"Project 'H'", my new story project (#3 in my main three projects) just dropped on SH. It is pending a title, and synopsis, but is the result of an interesting idea that I had. Well, at least I thought it would be interesting and cool. Long story short, it's a light Harem Rom-Com with a sci-fi...

First off, if you haven't already read the prelude and chapter 1 of Aethara: The King's Path then you should definitely check them out here first. Series Page Prelude (Read First Please) Chapter 1 If you have finished reading them, and are desperate to know what happens next, here's an early...

Okay, here's the situation. I'm debating between two (so far) title ideas for Aethara: The King's Path Chapter 2 that I honestly don't actually like. I've thrown the two options, as well as an open-ended one for folks to submit their own ideas. Chapter 2 primarily focuses on the aerial battle...

For those interested in checking out the series, click below. Aethara: The King's Path (Series) It's been about a week since the first chapter was released, and a little longer since the Prelude (where the story begins) and there's been a few folks who've read so far. It's been over a month...

I already asked something like this for the readers, but this one here's for all you authors out there. What are some of your favorite openings to write for your stories? Do you prefer writing In Media Res openings (IE: Starting in the action or in the moment)? Or perhaps something slower, where...