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    First-Time Author Looking for Honest Feedback ?

    Hi everyone! its lily here I just posted the first chapter of my original fantasy story All the Strings Are Connected, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback — especially on emotional impact, pacing, and character interactions. I’m trying to balance humor with ache, and I care deeply...
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    Writing Looking for Honest Feedback on My Story ?

    Hi everyone! I just posted the first chapter of my original fantasy story All the Strings Are Connected, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback — especially on emotional impact, pacing, and character interactions. I’m trying to balance humor with ache, and I care deeply about how group...
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