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Hey everyone, I just posted the first chapters of my dark fantasy story When the Demon Child Dances with Death, which follows Rim a demon raised by a human assassin, caught between two worlds. I’d love to get some honest feedback: Did the opening catch your attention? How did the tone and...

Hey everyone, I just posted the first few chapters of my story, and I’d really love to get some honest feedback. What did you like? What didn’t work so well? Most importantly how did it make you feel while reading? Whether it’s about the characters, the tone, the pacing, or anything else, I’m...