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  1. Shido_kun

    What are the stuff that are needed to considered while writing in third person pov.

    I’ve always preferred writing in first person because it feels more personal and immersive to me. However, I found it limiting in terms of perspective and narrative freedom. After doing some research and reading other novels, I noticed that many of them were written in third person—and they...
  2. Shido_kun

    About emotional scene

    Any advice on how to deepen the emotional impact of the scene. I updated chapter 4 and i tried making it emotional and i am quite confidence that i did great. but can you point out the weakness on it. Chapter 4
  3. Shido_kun

    Does the length of chapter make any difference?

    I just posted Chapter 2, but it ended up being pretty long. Is that a turn-off for you as a reader, or is it fine as long as it’s interesting? Would love some honest feedback on the chapter — pacing, writing, anything that stands out Link: Novel
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    Can someone give me some feedback.

    This isn’t my first story. I’ve loved writing since middle school, but that passion grew even stronger when I entered high school ( mostly influenced by other authors and the way they bring their stories to life, which I truly admire. ) But as always I always write few chapter and abandon it...
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