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  1. S.TrujilloL.

    Haunted Audio‑Logs: Honest First‑5‑Chapter Feedback Wanted

    Hi everyone, I recently uploaded the first five chapters of a story that’s been haunting me for years. It’s not about chosen ones or epic quests. It’s about people who didn’t resist when they should have — and are now trying to reclaim the one thing they didn’t know they’d lost: the ability to...
  2. S.TrujilloL.

    "We didn’t lose the war. We lost the ability to choose.” — Need feedback on emotional sci-fi prologue about AI and surrender

    Hi everyone, it’s a pleasure to be part of this amazing community. I created an audiobook version of the prologue of The Story of Nemi, and I’d truly appreciate your honest feedback — whether you prefer listening, reading, or both. Your perspective means a lot and helps shape the direction of...
  3. S.TrujilloL.

    What’s the most emotional animal companion in fiction that moved you to tears?

    Hi folks, Just wanted to open up a heartstring-pulling question: Could be a loyal dog, a quiet creature, a sentient AI pet, or even something metaphorical. Was it the way they waited? The way they never spoke, but always understood? The moment they refused to leave? Why I’m Asking: I’m...
  4. S.TrujilloL.

    "The Story of Nemi" – A Sci-fi Novel That Doesn't Ask If AI Can Think, but If We Still Can Feel

    Feedback welcome: Emotional sci-fi, ethical dilemmas, narrative rhythm Hi everyone, I’m Sergio — physician, clinical educator, and debut author of a speculative sci-fi novel that isn’t about the end of the world… but about the end of something more intimate: The will to choose. What is The...
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