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Someone on Royalroad commented on my chapter saying that it had a "disconnected feel" to it and that it might be the dashes. Stating that it had an "AI feel to it". The dashes were used to make it "flow" better in a way that commas, periods, new lines, etc don't really do for me while I read...

Is it better to do third person or first person? I had someeeee confusion when writing my current story and I kinda started with first person for the first 3 chapters and kinda uhhhh.... switched to 3rd person after...... Was I wrong to do that? Or is it fine? I'm not really sure but at least...

How much is too much(to the point where I would need to do the content warning thing)? Like is talking about heart removal and blood and whatnot fine? Or do I not really need to worry about it unless its some kinda weird stuff.