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Which family drama is more interesting? (1) Title: A White Ribbon on My Birthday: I Love You So Much, My Big Sister Premise: A white-haired woman gives a white ribbon to her little sister on her 7th birthday. She hugs her big sister cheerfully. Her big sister is the gentlest woman in the...

Just share your opinion. There are no right or wrong answers here. :blob_melt:

Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre? Especially for heavy, sensitive, and mature content, which marker do you use to warn potential readers before reading your fiction? For example: Genres: Action, Fantasy, Drama, Mature Trigger Warning: Contains graphic violence, emotional...

Witch vs Knightess: Which do you prefer? My answer is very subjective, I prefer witches because I am an immortal magical girl. :blob_melt:

Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work Well, I'm trying to reactivate my old work. This is my only fiction that is not dark fantasy. It is a romance fantasy work with elements of drama, psychology, and josei. Here is the prologue (~1,8k words): My questions are more focused on the hook...

Apocalypse Lore in Fiction I just read a review of Warhammer 40K yesterday... and yeah, it's truly dark. The world is truly dystopian in the literal sense. What made me uncomfortable (even just reading its review) was the scale of the apocalypse, the destruction, the darkness, and the despair...

Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction? Narrator is the 'unseen voice' who conveys the story to the reader/viewer through narration. An illustration of the relationship between the reader, narrator and story can be described as follows: In fiction, the narrator's position is usually relative...

Handle Sensitive Content of Mother's Childbirth As the title above, I want to narrate the scene meaningfully, emotionally, and not exploitatively. I want to respect a mother's struggle. I already have a reference but I'm not sure how to implement it precisely. What do you think? I'd love to...

Imagine the following two plot scenarios: (1) World influences MC. The world here is alive, has a social system, and has characters other than MC. Conflict in a location can create a chain reaction that can ultimately affect MC's life. For example, a war between kingdoms causes the...

Reader Tolerance in Principle of "Show it, Don't Tell it" in Narrating Scene Elements In fiction writing, we are familiar with the principle of "show it, don't tell it", which involves the reader in the story (immersion). However, in practice, almost no fiction can apply this principle...

I mean, as an author, you might draw on real-world references for your character's bacground and physical appearance. What nationality would you use as your protagonist's identity?

Error Tolerance Between Story Content, Storytelling and Language Story content is what is told in fiction, including characters, worldbuilding, plot, and conflict. Storytelling is how the story's content is conveyed to the reader through narration so that the author's imagination can be...

What do you think about yandere villainess as an antagonist to the protagonist?

In line with the question above, I'd like to hear your thoughts. There are no right or wrong answers here, just sharing your opinions.

You can calculate the engagement of your work on SH and RR, then compare them. For example: On SH, your fiction has 40k views, 200 readers, and 10 ratings. Meanwhile, on RR, your fiction has 10K views, 10 followers (readers), and 2 ratings. You can ignore favorites because the parameters...

Multiple POV vs. Single POV Which fiction do you prefer to read as a reader? Which fiction do you prefer to write as an author?

Attention Span Tolerance for Min-Max Number of Sentences in a Paragraph Please state your opinion in the following format, for example: A maximum attention span of five sentences per paragraph for atmospheric description; A minimum of a sentence per paragraph for sharp dialogue in battle scene.

Feedback for Handling Sensitive Content Well, I make a feedback request for chapters with dark, sensitive, heavy and emotional content. I'm not sure if I've handled these kinds of chapters wisely considering my series is starting to reach an emotional climax. Here's one of the darkest...

Feedback for A Little Daughter Character Well, I rewrote one of my chapters with the first POV from a little girl's perspective. Here is the result: My questions are: How old do you think Caelan El Rose is (actual age)? How is Caelan El Rose's character in this chapter? How adorable do you...

Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said...", "...Annie said, patting Barry's shoulder," "...the blonde girl complained," etc, can provide quick navigation in identifying who is speaking while providing...