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I wrote an entire chapter with an action scene, but I can't say if it is slow, fast, good, bad. I would appreciate if somebody took a look at it say what's bad and can be fixed.

I've recently edited and revamped my prologue, chapter 1,2,3 and want to know if the plot is engaging or not. I would appreciate it if anybody decides to give it a try and provide feedback. B*stard of Abaddon. Warning: This contains sensitive themes that may trigger a few people.:s_smile:

I re-wrote my chapter 1 with the feedback I received from many people. This time, I improved a few things, prose-wise and storytelling-wise. Coming to the prologue, I re-vamped it completely, and it is now shorter and is directly connected to the MC. I hope someone might provide me with some...

As the title suggests, I got my first 1k views! :blob_aww:and 81st ranking in racism. :sweating_profusely:

I received a text this morning, and don't know if it is legit or not. I am feeling happiness and caution at the same time.

Painted an art piece after seeing another art piece online.

I want to paint an art piece, and I took another art piece as a reference. But it has so many confusing things, so I would appreciate it if an experienced artist dissected it. Reference: I would like to know how the smoke or fire? In this art has been made. And how the water reflection effect...

Forgive the armour, it's my first time painting metal. :blob_sweat:

As the title suggests, I wrote a chapter with child abuse in it. I will post it here and ask a few questions to know if I fulfilled my intentions or not. 1. What were your feelings when you read the chapter? 2. What did you feel about the MC? 3. What did the chapter convey thematically ( in...

I just want to know if I improved in any aspect of writing or not, it is kind of infuriating since there is 0 interaction with readers. I'll paste 3 scenes from three different chapters, just tell me.

Multiple things irl and just lately just losing interest in writing. How long is long enough if I take rest?

I just want to know if this chapter was engaging or not, that's all. Without any delay, they glided over the slumbering horde. The air around them was thin and filled with sulfur. Deron was not going to run out of breath; inside his chest, his lungs kept expanding and collapsing relentlessly...

Inspired by few people in here, I decided to dump my sketches here.

Finally completed writing my first 10 chapters, I know it is not much, but as a new author, it feels good. :blob_aww:

Finally done with my MC's portrait, forgive my background, nothing came to my mind.

I just received a request from another author in royal road, buy I don't know what it is and how does it work.

As the title suggests, I wrote a chapter with identity confusion, and I want to know if it was conveyed. And your thoughts about the narrative.

As many writers pointed out, I realised prose meant the whole chapter with context and imagery, which pulls the reader into the world. So i tried my best and completed the chapter with as much description i can provide dynamically.

I want to improve my prose; as such, I am learning new things and implementing them in my new chapters. I want to know if the prose in this section is good, bad, or downright shit. The metal floor shuddered as Zerra crashed; the cheers that echoed a moment ago now died down. Silence swallowed...

I need an opinion on a particular scene that includes action and interaction between characters. I would appreciate it if you tell me what you felt while reading, only your feeling not feedback. Thanks