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I need an opinion on a particular scene that includes action and interaction between characters. I would appreciate it if you tell me what you felt while reading, only your feeling not feedback. Thanks

How to stay motivated to write? I am a new writer and my work is also very new, I am aware of the fact that most web novels don't take off if they don't have at least 50 chapter or so. But still the lack fo engagement and declining views are very demotivating. So I want to know how did you guys...

Ofc the artwork is not finished yet

Is hinting or including a scene where it is implied that a child has gone through it or is going through it too much? I am writing a dark fantasy novel, and I want to know how much is too much?

Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon. Theme - A city built on greed. The pitt is one of the main cities because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections. 1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and...

I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared himself, “The Ashen chapel was once a beautiful monument of the Pitt,” he rubbed his palms as the night carried faint whispers. “Citizens of the Pitt showed their...

As someone said, my chapter 1 sucked. It had a soulless MC. My synopsis was also misleading. So, I've revised it and rewritten my synopsis. I would appreciate your feedback on it. Thank you. Synopsis: Aegis has no interest in destiny. All he wants is coins. In the infernal city of Inanitas, a...

What do people think about cutthroat selfish MCs that only care about themselves and occasionally their friends/family? I want to know if people like them or not.

Since many people mistook my character for a girl I've re-drawn his design and added a few details.

I want to know if this particular block felt good or bad, i would appreciate if you can state your reasons. The shadow in front of him lunged. Aegis crouched and shielded himself, Growls resounded above him for a moment. They ended with a slash, the shadow in front of him flopped onto the...

There are two characters in my novel who share a past, and it will be referenced in future multiple times. How can i write the relationship between them without confusing the readers?

I re-did my cover art as people said. I need opinion on this new one and if it is better than the old one or not. Old one. New one.

I need feedback on one of my characters, his name is aegis and this chapter perfectly captures how he behaves. I want to know your opinions on this particular character. Chapter 4 - The boy from the arena. Aegis wiped the table clean. His faded tunic bore tiny holes, and his burning red eyes...

Pretty much what is in the title. I want to scrap few chapters as I believe I can come with a better direction and plot than what I have previously written.

I have revised my 3 chapters with the feedbacks i got. Mainly about the sentence structure and how each sentence was carried on to a new line. Apart from that I've went through my 3 chapters again and realized the fiends in it were behaving like human with horns and tails. So I've added few...

How can i write more believable friendships, relationships, toxic-relationships? What micro actions or traits help? What do i need to show to make it believable?

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting. You can check it out here.

My ongoing novel with less favorites and readers is ranked higher than other novels with more favorites, reviews, and readers. What is going on?

I am writing a story that involves mature themes and cults. For the cover art, I’ve drawn an illustration and would like genuine opinions about it.

I am writing a dark fantasy story and it contains themes such as slavery, cannibalism, child abuse, and psychological corruption. These elements are not included for shock value, but to explore the moral and emotional decline of the characters and the world they inhabit. If you choose to read...