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    Would love some feedback on my new story

    Hey! I just uploaded a new story recently. Anyone wants to have a quick look at the first 2 chapters and tell me if you'd keep reading? Thanks! Here's the link to my story: Maximum Intimidation Knight In a World Full of Mages
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    Looking for Feedback on my new story

    Hi! I've posted a new story the other day and while growth has been decent, I'm still looking for whether there are things I can improve. I would love some feedback if anyone has some spare time to look at the chapters I've posted. Thank you in advance for your help! Here's the book: Basic...
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    Feedback wanted on this new comedy LitRPG

    So I've written a story. It starts off simply as a joke, to see how far I can drive a story forward with nothing more than sheer ridiculousness. Here's what I've arrived at. Can any of y'all have a look and let me know what you think of this story? Thanks...
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