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    Feedback for chapter 1

    https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1493021-ruins-of-gold/chapter/1735925/?cid=3654097 this is my current chapter 1 and need feedback about the history lessons how much exposition dumpy does it feel how does it flow to the next part after the lessons how are Jonahs thoughts Also feedback on the...
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    Dialogue and paragraph passage thingie

    Whats a good way to do dialogue in an situation that can be considered extreme? Also how can i make passage through paragraphs more seamless? Currently the way it is in my novel the way it goes from one paragraph to the other feels abrupt
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    (Feedback)Want to get my chapter 1 right before doing anything else

    Need feedbacks for it review it based on if you would click the next chapter button or if you would drop it without clicking it. If you think it sucks dont just think it sucks, say it sucks and give me feedback for why it sucks so i can keep that in mind for my future chapters...
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