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  1. TheTaintedOne

    Dark Fantasy Review swap?

    Hey! I’m looking to do a review swap with anyone who’s willing, maybe like a 5 Chapter review? I’m interested in reading dark fantasy, but I need to stipulate that I won’t read anything with LitRPG elements or Isekai. Nothing wrong with those, just not my preference. I enjoy series like A...
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    How's my synopsis? Tips please

    Here's the synopsis for my epic fantasy novel. I have tried to establish the core character conflict in this character-driven synopsis with cta in the end. The title for the story is 'The Dragon's Blood'. With the help from last thread I was able to fix few issues and created the new one...
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    Any tips for writing a story synopsis?

    Here's the synopsis for my epic fantasy novel. I have tried to establish the core character conflict in this character-driven synopsis. The title for the story is 'The Dragon's Blood'. Any tips would be much appreciated, from world-level conflict to side plot conflict. Note that for Einar...
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    Editing Need help from a writer

    I need help with Chapter One of my story. Previously, there was an issue with the reader getting into the story from the transition from third person to first person. Before, they were different chapters, but now I tried to sharpen the transition while putting them in one chapter. Even add a...
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    Need help with the chapter I rewrote

    Previously, there was an issue with the reader getting into the story from the transition from third person to first person. Before, they were different chapters, but now I tried to sharpen the transition while putting them in one chapter. Even add a mystery to the first part of the scene where...
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    Started my first novel, need feedback on the prologue and the writing style.

    I have recently started uploading the first edited version after the final draft and hell there was so much to edit. There will be more to edit for final version, yes. But, I haven't received any feedback from any readers, and though about posting it here to get some blessed souls to read...
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    Looking For Feedback | The Cursed Bond | Epic Fantasy

    In a world still bleeding from old wars, a long forgotten taboo has been broken. From the mists of the forbidden land, a nightmare is unleashed, and a darkness begins to stir, poisoning the very roots of civilization. The age of peace is ending. In a remote village of northern wilds, our...
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    Epic Fantasy - Chronicles of the Red

    Synopsis: Einar has been haunted by the ghost of another man's life. His nights are filled with dreams of bloody battlefields and the face of a golden-haired woman he feels he has loved across centuries, even as his days are spent in a quiet village where such things are the stuff of legends. He...
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