I’ve been working on my isekai story Trapped in Another Stupid World, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback from fellow writers and readers here.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1425698/trapped-in-yet-another-stupid-world/
I’ve been working on a long-form story called Second Divine War. It’s a mix of urbanfantasy and fantasy war, thanks
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1684289/the-second-divine-war/
Hey everyone,
I’m looking for some brutally honest feedback on my story, Trapped in Yet Another Stupid World. I want to improve, and I know that means hearing the good, the bad, and the ugly. you can be honestly, i need to improve...