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    What is it that im missing?

    This is my second shot at writing something, and I'd like to think I've improved my writing style. What I'm trying to do is refine it to the best I can and get my own sort of thing. I think ive found that. So I do realize the story has very little worldbuilding or a serious hook that would bait...
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    Oh feedback warriors, grace me with your words

    Honestly it's my first time actually trying to write something after all the years I've chosen to day dream instead. Though I know I'm a total noob but I at least thought why not dip my toes and see how wet they get. So If you could do me a favor and give me cold hard criticism that does'nt...
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    Feedback warriors please grace me with your words

    Honestly it's my first time actually trying to write something after all the years I've chosen to day dream instead. Though I know I'm a total noob but I at least thought why not dip my toes and see how wet they get. So If you could do me a favor and give me cold hard criticism that doesn't...
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