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  1. CoastalFortress

    Review feedback on a critical story element.

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    Is this the wrong place for my story?

    I started writing my first story a couple of months ago, and I was advised to post it here, as this platform is famous for its interactivity. As a beginner, I knew I needed feedback—it helps me understand what I’m doing wrong. Without it, I’ll never be able to improve my writing. But two...
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    Looking for feedback

    Hello, I'm looking for feedback on my story. It is set in an original medieval setting that will focus on intrigue, politics, and warfare. The early chapters don't elaborate much on the characters, as I had planned to explore that later; adding a sense of urgency and confusion was my purpose...
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