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  1. OscarTlau

    New writing style feedback needed.

    I've been reading alot of warhammer books recently, mostly those written by Dan Abnet. Those kind of influenced me into actually improve my writing style. I really want to know if its noticably improved from the previous chapters I've released. If anyone is willing to spare a short moment to...
  2. OscarTlau

    College writers and studies.

    It's been a while since I posted anything, let alone have the time to write anything. But since I'm coming back here, I wanted to ask. If there are any writers that go to college or even school. How do y'all balance your writing and studies? For me it's pretty unbalanced since by the time I am...
  3. OscarTlau

    New chapter feedback and advices.

    Hello! Im back FINALLY after my PC broke down due to electrical issues. Anyways, the new chapter of my (reworked) novel just dropped and I want to request some sincere feedbacks. I am trying to get better at writing tension and super fast action scenes, so abit of advices on those would really...
  4. OscarTlau

    Reworked chapter release

    After weeks of writing, I have decided to release the reworked version of the first chapter of my novel. Although the synopsis is still being worked on, may I kindly request a review on it. Helpful tips and critisisms would be much helpful. If you HAVE read the old chapter before, how is the...
  5. OscarTlau

    Synopsis update.

    After much thinking, I have finally decided to rerelease my chapters. Starting with the synopsis, since it is the HARDEST part to write ngl. Here is the updated synopsis, tmk if there are anythings to change or how I could improve it: In the beginning, there was peace. Its Creator–The Word...
  6. OscarTlau

    Delete or Edit, And, Split or nah?

    After weeks of thinking about it... I have come to the conclusion that I am unsatisfied with the chapters I have released , and want to add or change some (or more) stuff. Should i Delete the chapters and Re-release them, Or just edit the chapters? Another thing is, most of my chapters are...
  7. OscarTlau

    Should I put a glossary on my novel?

    Hello! I am a beginner to novel writing and i was wondering IF i should add a glossary in my novel. I feel like glossaries are for complex novels that are based on systems, litrpgs, etc etc.... I also feel that it kinda spoils parts of the novel, since the characters or stuffs are going to be...
  8. OscarTlau

    WHAT WOULD YOU DO? (to my fellow fiction writers as well as others)

    Just like a classic rezero style you, rubbed your eye and BOOM... you are transported to your novel's (fav) world. You are just as who you are, no powers, no nothing. Just the knowledge you have of the world and characters you have writen. The question is, what are you going to do? The...
  9. OscarTlau

    New chapter Release!

    I just published the latest chapter to my novel. Please go have a read and let me know your thoughts and critisism. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1215877/the-chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king/
  10. OscarTlau

    Novel Update.

    For the 2 people that actually reads my novel. Chapter 1 and 2 has been updated with a few changes in the plot and writing. Chapter 3 and 4 will soon follow. Most changes will be the sentences and maybe fill up some plot holes or plots that needed change for the future chapters. Chapter 5...
  11. OscarTlau

    New Chapter release review

    I just release a new chapter for my novel. The writing has been improved and hopefully you guys like it. Please check out the previous chapters for people who are new. Please give your sincere feedbacks and Thank you. Check out the latest chapter here...
  12. OscarTlau

    Request feedback on my Novel.

    I just release a new chapter to my novel and would like some feedback. My current Novel: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1215877/the-chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king/ Let me know how it reads?
  13. OscarTlau

    Have a read at my new novel!

    Hey! Do you mind checking out the novel I wrote? It's called "The Chronicles of the Scarlet King." Here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1215877/the-chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king/ I am new to writing and open to hear any tips the experienced have. Have a read at it, even though it is only...
  14. OscarTlau

    I just released a my first novel. Please give it a read and feedback.

    24 years after demons started attacking Earth as Humans fight for their survival. Humanity has far advanced in the future and yet, the demons have consumed almost half of Earth. Praying has proved useless, for the gods have banished their eyes from the sinners. Angels arrived though not for...
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