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  1. Yuin

    Feedback pls

    So the reason why I’m writing novels time to time is to train my English and improve my writing for exams lol… So I decided to publish some of my practice essays I wrote in my free time and want some feedback! (Disclaimer: it‘s academic essay, not a narrative story) I also play a lot of games...
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    I gave the ML an OP ability, but set 12 restrictions

    I just want to know how you guys usually plan superpowers or abilities. Do you usually match the ability to the character’s personality, or treat it as a plot device? If so, do you ever try to create an original superpower just for fun? Also, do you think there’s a need for restrictions? Here’s...
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    What genres of music do you listen to while writing/reading?

    I always listen to specific genres to set the atmosphere and tone of my writing! Most of them are Jazz and classical, with a mix of electronic music Here are some examples: My way of life Over and over (the world we knew) As the world caves in Sway Autumn leaves Rachmaninoff piano concerto 2...
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    Dumping my novel’s illustrations

    Okay I’ll make this a thread. Say hi to my mc, Yohan in Return to You Who is Lost! (R2YWIL) I’ll keep updating time to time with sketches… (not the best at colouring) This is him working as a delivery man for The Guild.
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    First time drawing after 2 years of hiatus

    I didn’t quit drawing, I just got lazy. But recently, I’ve been very involved in my story and giving feedback so I decided to visualise Yohan (the mc in my story) for fun! You can check out “Return to you who is lost”, if you’re interested :blob_reach: Also, idk how to draw and colour the...
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    I wrote a story as an author but never read it as a reader

    I know this is a major red flag, but once I write a chapter, I don’t look back at it anymore. Until now, I’ve never read my story as a whole, and I’ve ignored all the mistakes because reading my own work is the least enjoyable part for me. My story has some potential, and I am passionate about...
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Dump your links here and I’ll give you a wonderful bs review! (With sincerity! Straight from the heart!:blob_cookie:) (I’m an inexperienced, unprofessional author/reader so take my words lightly. I’m doing this for fun because I’m bored. Feel free to disagree with my opinions, I just want to...
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    Hi, pls roast a novel that I wrote a year ago

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1161828/return-to-you-who-is-lost-bl/ btw, the BL element isn’t strong because I know many of the readers are not comfortable with that (I revised my prologue and remove the smut scene :blobthumbsup:) warning: I don’t have a storyboard when writing this. I...
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