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I'm taking part in a competition, could you tell me how my story is? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1111585/unwanted-scar/ Have I done too much exposition or used the narrator too much to explain what's going on? and how are the characters' dialogues? thank you in advance for your attention!

Do you like narrators in stories? explaining the concepts of the world, explaining what's happening in the scene. Or do you prefer a character from the story itself speaking/narrating the scene? This question came to mind after some people were discussing this question in hunter x hunter.

Are prophecies something that destroy history? Doesn't knowing that something was predestined from the beginning of the work make everything that was done before in vain? It takes away all the weight of the decisions, and renders useless everything that the character has worked hard to build...

I've been on both for 6 months and still haven't gotten any followers or likes on my posts. Does anyone here have any experience of this?

Hi, could you give an opinion on the first two chapters of my webnovel? tell me where I could improve etc. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1101935/pokmon--the-mystery-of-lavender-town/