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So what'd y'all think of when an author inserts themselves in universe to affect characters and the plot? Like say, for example an author makes an in universe character and writes them effecting the characters by let's say Killing their parents or making a sibling deathly ill.

So I'm writing one of the many Brain kids I've had over the course of four years and I was wondering if I could improve anywhere in my first one. In my (attempted) non-biased opinion I feel like my pacing off and I'm writing too many info dumps. I also feel like it's overall...kind of boring...