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    Writing Prompt The Demon Lord is only weak to you throwing it back

    Lord Freakmeister showed the true power of the freak side. Doom looms its ugly shadow over your fallen comrades. Despite your injured state, you stand up one final time, bend your back with your bodacious glutes sticking out against the great evil. However, Lord Freakmeister won't back down...
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    Make the saddest premise you can think of and then bury it in brainrot

    Go ahead. Create something that would make Makoto Shinkai cry and then drag it across the dirt with 67 nonstop. I double dare you.
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    Update on my upcoming novel (I fucked up)

    This is me if you bother wondering. Anyway, after spending months writing drafts on Google Docs, I forgot I still needed to save those drafts on this site AND Royal Road. Formatting each of them is very boring and grueling in my experience. I work two shifts as a chef and housekeeper, so you can...
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    ? Happy New Year! ?

    I haven't been on this site in months, but still. Have a great year, y'all!
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    Y'all ever felt embarrassed with your first attempt at writing?

    My first story was called "Lifekiller," and I wrote it when I was 15. I attempted to deconstruct shounen tropes but just came up with incoherent babbling, less showing and more telling, and other grave sins. Honestly, I'll post the first chapter later on the feedback section just for the lulz...
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    Hi, everyone. You don't remember me, but please hear me out.

    I'm the Vampire Survivors-inspired litRPG dude who said I'd rerelease my book on November since that's when the Writeathon will happen at the end of the year. It did well in the first month (80+ readers), but I needed proper promoting if I wanted more people to enjoy my work. However, something...
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    Prematurely deleting my book now. I'm sorry

    Despite my family and I moving out to a different city in 2 months as I've said, we've have been busy packing our things, as well as buying new utensils and appliances in case our old stuff won't survive for long. I haven't had much time to write new chapters because we've been doing this...
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    I feel like deleting my novel (not due to burnout)

    Essentially, I finally gained enough tips from my two jobs for an ad campaign on RR, and my family's moving into a different city in two months. I also wanna revise the initial chapters with much better pacing because it's clear to me this issue is hampering my follower potential on that site...
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    I think it's time I write a prologue

    It may be overdue since it's already been 35 chapters when writing this, but I've heard it helps give people the feel of what my story is all about. Please let me here some of your suggestions whether I should start with a bang or slow things down. Thank you!
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    Feedback on my new outline for my initial chapters

    My story kinda has a bit of an emphasis of fight scenes and fleshing out the world through said fight scenes. You can check it out for reference. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1285692/beware-the-horde-isekai-litrpg/ After some trial and error, I finally thought of a better outline that...
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    I finally hit 20k views!

    After hitting 10k views last month, I didn't think I would get this far: Once again, thanks so much to everyone who has supported me and given me critique. I can only imagine how much better my story will be if I fixed the pacing issues on the initial chapters. Stay tuned! ???
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    Are giant sea turtles overrated?

    I just got probably the hardest image prompt I'll ever see for my latest chapter, and it's all thanks to me being a huge sucker for Discworld. Then, I realized I'm literally a dime a dozen when it comes to fantasy authors coming up with "unique" creatures. Should I consider brining my own twist...
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    Am I doing metaphors right?

    I learned from a friend that even horny scenes or scenes that imply the horny should still fall under the "show, don't tell" aspect of writing. So, I did my best trying to convey a scene in my latest chapter without using words like "meat wand" or phrases like "breasting boobily down the...
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    ? Happy New Year!!! ?

    Well, at least in my time zone, lmao. Either way, I hope y'all have a great year. ?
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    I have an announcement

    From now on, my posting schedule for my book will be 8:00 PM EST, but I'll still update every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. I made this decision because I'm quite the night owl due to my two jobs and also because my doctor told me to get more rest during the day. My health's been pretty low...
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    I finally have a better plan for promoting my story

    Ever since I published my book, it's clear to me it has a ton of potential. I still gain a following despite not promoting it the "right way," which involves money. In other words, it could be more successful than I realize. I just gotta know how the publishing game works. So, here's my plan...
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    Feedback on my new upcoming synopsis

    I thought about expanding my synopsis to show a glimpse of what my protagonist is like. Here's what I came up with: Please let me know your thoughts if it's either good enough or too much. Here's my current synopsis by comparison:
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    When is it good to start an ad campaign in RR?

    I have 21 chapters already, but I've seen authors there who've only begun using ads after 4 months of writing or even 9 months. Those who use ads as soon as they publish anything turn out to be established authors who already have a following. Is my content still lacking for anyone to care...
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    Do you ever feel bad losing a follower?

    For me, I learned to just accept it as a usual occurrence. I lost two followers this week, but it was only on RR, so it's not that big of a deal. As for my followers on this site, it's pretty much the same 49 readers.
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    Want a cultivation book cover? Follow these two easy steps!

    Step 1: go to any free AI tool site (i.e., Bing Copilot) Step 2: generate anything that looks like the following, and you're good to go Example A: Example B: Example C: And with that, my work here is done. Go and write the next Chinese Boy Seeks Immortality #942738627, which will sell...
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