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  1. TheMonotonePuppet

    The Words of Today for Tomorrow (Discussion)

    Sooo... watching a show where one of the magical girls said the toy is sus. It surprised me to hear the popularized contraction. Perhaps the translators of the dub are taking liberties (which I don't mind cause it was kinda funny), but I didn't think that such a 'this-half-of-the-decade' phrase...
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    The “Bratty” meme

    So… I never saw the “Brat! ??????“ until Scribble Hub. I always thought it was a reference to some tsundere-type deal. Repeated enough, it was just some funny anime reference. Since RepresentingEnvy used it, that gave it the sticker of approval for being a safe joke/reference in my mind. A bunch...
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    Transitioning out of grimdark

    Eventually, hopefully, I’ll transition from grimdark to include more comedy. But after one reader commented that one of my more surrealist chapters didn’t fit with the tone of the rest of my story (according to them, my story is normally more cosmic horror with the sensation of drowning while...
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    The Extremis of Gore

    I'm curious, from a purely logical writing standpoint, thinking of all of the cut and dry rules you remember from English classes, how would you go about writing something - not small or short - where the point of it is portray the extremis of gore, violence, and squicky matters in fine detail...
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    Synopsis Don'ts

    What are some things you would strongly recommend never doing in a synopsis? For me, it's starting with "A [Insert "man", "woman", "enby", whatever] with the power to...". Don't do it. It's how I know the story is trash. Not even redeemable trash or trash for trash's sake. It's just bad...
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    Spacebattles is harsh...

    SpaceBattles fanfic section has some harsh readers...:sweating_profusely: If you aren't careful, you get roasted. And even then, the comments one gets can make you feel a little toasty... as in toasted, with no butter.:sweat_smile: I know I've been lucky on Scribble Hub and Royal Road. I'm...
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    Foibles and Hated Tropes

    For the narcissistic, arrogant, and quote-unquote “objectively perfect”, this question is not for you! For the subjectivist, adhering to the philosophy in truth or to troll, this question is equally not for you! For the flawed readers not ruled out by the above, I ask: “What trope do you...
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    Making Master powers

    Minions, I wish to see unique mental influence powers! Any novel ones that stand out to in TV shows or books? Great creepypasta or SCP mind-fuckery? Good ones in that noggin of yours? This puppet desires them all! P.S. changing a power's aesthetic, lore, and thought-provoking limitations makes...
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    Teenager activities

    So... I'm writing a story and the MC, named River, is a socially stunted once-extrovert now-introvert by way of depression. Her mom didn't really let her do any "normal" teen activities. River's got a friend/is the adopted sibling of her friend, Riley. who feels as if her father and extended...
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    The Morality of Accidents

    I'm curious as to what are the limits of your understanding for others. How much can you sympathize with someone who has caused carnage through no fault of their own? In fiction, there are many stories of unwilling accessories to murder. Apparently, in law in the U.S.A., if you are forced to...
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    Favorite angst or grim trope

    What's your favorite angsty or grim trope? Where you enjoy the suffering of the character? They can be overarching tropes like a slapstick series of increasingly unfortunate events. Or personality tropes. An example being main characters that are genuinely suicidal. The classic, time-honored...
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    Powers borne through suffering

    What's a traumatic event you could feasibly go through or have gone through? Don't tell me!:blob_shock: Just keep the event in mind.:blob_wink: Now, if you received a power that lets you prevent the traumatic event from happening again, but doesn't solve the root problem of the traumatic...
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    Memory loss

    In writing, some of the most tragic characters to me are those who have lost memory, have difficulty remembering things, or those who have confronted people who have lost memory. Neville's parents (Harry Potter), Digital Circus (Kinger), Subaru (Re: Zero), etc. As someone who, without...
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    PHO Forums

    Hello, hello! I couldn't figure out whether this would be a writing prompt or community game, but with how unsuccessful my last community game was, I wouldn't want the thread's branding to not be on-point, so to speak. For a fanfic of mine, I thought it would be fun to roleplay one of the...
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    Good Body Horror

    Lately I've been feeling like my inspirations for writing body horror have been mundane; rote. It's disappointing. I can write all I want about making incisions in one's stomach to unspool guts for a safety harness or cry ribbons of blood as you plummet to the unforgiving puce walls of flesh...
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    Replacing swearing

    So, for a fanfic I'm writing, the MC doesn't swear. I can't think of what words to replace that kind of crass intensity and youthful expression of shock. Do you guys have examples? Edit: I think just deleting the swear word actually still works in the sentence I was thinking of (emotional...
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    Deleted member?

    Why did Aez_Nairo get banned? Why did they get the kebosh, the hammer, the 'entrance denied'? Or deleted. Not sure which was which.
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    DnD-where to do it?

    So, I want to play DnD, but I've never played it before, and I don't know the kinds of digital places (if any exist) like Discord forums or something where they would be willing to play with complete and utter newbies. Not to mention, I was wondering if you guys had recommendations for YouTube...
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    Parahuman Scribble Hub Part 1

    If you were in the "worm" universe, you'd probably have parahuman powers! You're all traumatized lil beans, and it's time you admit it! @Count_Quackula @Simple_Russian_Boi @Hopper The trail of the comet creates a heat-like haze. Enough comets will obscure vision for everyone but yourself...
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    Physics question about a superpower

    You have a rope. You have a harness for a rock. And you have a rock. You have the ability to push and/or pull on only the harness and the rope with your mind (we are assuming this rope and this harness are indestructible). Keep in mind... This stays in an environment where all other...
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