I was thinking about working on a new story. I need feedback or some ideas that would help. Criticism is welcomed.
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1495884-a-speedrunners-guide-to-a-perfect-ending/chapter/1495903/
If anyone is willing to read my work and give an honest review and ways on how to improve, I'll greatly appreciate it. I personally feel that the earlier chapters are a bit rough but the later chapters become a bit better. Thank you for your time...