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  1. Ahrihn

    feedback for 1st chapter pls

    hello people! I'm currently writing another novel and wanted some feed back for my first chapter. Please be as brutal as you lot need, I can take it. I appreciate any and all efforts! The first chapter: Please be as brutal as you all need, i love honest and sharp feedback. Ideally, please...
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    confused about genres

    I'm currently writing a YA novel but i'm not sure which genre/s it would fit into. Any help here is appreciated! My novel has: Romance (for context, while the romance isn't the key point of the story, it is one of the main reasons for the MC's development and essential for the climax &...
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    Looking for feedback

    Hello! I'm soon to apply for a writing competition, and I'd like some feedback on my short story prior to submission. However, due to some publishing rules, I cannot place the draft directly onto ScribbleHub — I will have to privately share it via GoogleDocs. After getting feedback, I will...
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    swear words in historical novel?

    Hello hello. I'm currently writing a Xianxia, and I'm wondering if the following curse words would break immersion in a traditional historical chinese setting: Fuck Shit Bullshit Idiot Twat For now, I've left all of them but changed 'fuck' to the untranslated ‘他妈的’ . Do you guys think having...
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    Writing need help with planning

    Hey! So I've been writing something and I've gotten stuck. Basically, I got my MC and her team (MC and ML are gods, plus two ghosts and a human) that need to investigate a goddess to prove that she's been kidnapping mortals and dumping them in a mountain range (where they were then killed by one...
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    Writing do hands bleed a lot? TW: self-harm, gore

    I'm writing a scene where the MC self-harms, one part of which involving her scratching out/tearing the back of her hands. Would this bleed a lot? Like to the extent of dripping blood? Also can a gas lighter (like a long tube ones) cause significant, obvious burns? Are those ones painful? Do ppl...
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    why do people 'like' Notes+Content Warning chapter posts

    when I began writing, the chapter with the most likes was the Notes+Content Warning post/chapter. ...Why???? Does this happen with anyone else? I'm very curious~~ :blob_popcorn::blob_popcorn:
  9. Ahrihn

    feedback pls

    I'm wondering if the novel I'm writing, Blackbird's, beginning chapters are engaging. Like, is the Prologue something I should keep, discard, or edit? Just some general feedback, I suppose, esp. for characters and if enough plot is present in the chapters. Also, is my premise something commonly...
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    how should I write a Yuri/how does Yuri work

    How should I write a Yuri? Not gonna lie, I've never read/written a Yuri before :sweating_profusely: (don't know how the deed is done either), but the characters I want to write are refusing to be a B/B or G/B couple. Any tips? Any ideas? Any pits that I must avoid? All are welcome and greatly...
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