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Hey there, can you check mine too? I publish my story both on ScribbleHub and RoyalRoad, but I have more chapters on RR if you don't mind checking there RoyalRoad link

Hey there, mind checking mine too? Crimson Fogland: A Post-Apocalyptic LitRPG Transmigration

Hey there, I would love a feedback as well on my first chapter Chapter 1: Red Fog is All I Can See Thanks!

Hey there, can I have a feedback for my new story as well? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794050/crimson-fogland-a-postapocalyptic-litrpg-transmigration/

Thanks!!

Hmm, I feel like keeping the man, can you make a few without the tentacle monster? Uh... and for the image to be portrait rather than landscape if that's possible? I hope I'm not asking too much

Not exactly what I have in mind, but I guess it can work as temporary cover, especially the first few. It's horrifying to see that the eldritch monster and the airship merge together XD, I guess the AI can't differentiate both? Anyway, thank you very much

Alright then, I won't hesitate further. I'm kind of in need of a good cover for my new story (you can see the one in my signature as reference). No worry, I made the cover myself through AI, but I'm so bad at it... Descriptive: A post-apocalyptic world that's covered by red fog all around, with...

Hey there, just asking, am I allowed to ask for one or two more?

Thank you so much! I like them all except the last one :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:, the last one looks straight up from cheap anime, it's funny how AI can generate that one.

Can I have one too? Descriptive: A pretty teenage girl in a black Victorian dress with shining silver hair that reached down to her waist, and a black frilly headband. She wore thin black gloves and thigh-long black stockings and had porcelain-white, delicate skin and a pair of bright purple...

If you're still open, then please do mine too. Thank you!

I see, you have a point.

Actually what concern me about your story is neither the content nor the synopsis but the cover. You certainly have one of the most popular tag in Scribble Hub, being "Gender Bender," but you didn't capitalize on that. Most Authors with similar genre as yours have sexy anime girls as covers for...

Thank you for your both opinions. @Niame You're right on that one! It doesn't add anything. @greyblob The one you suggest can work and short as well, but it feels a bit lacking somehow. I think your synopsis is the exact opposite from mine. And personally, I like it more when a synopsis is not...

Hmm, thank you for your opinion. But I don't know how to make it better...

I'm not asking much, but I'm simply want to know whether what I have now is enough to hook readers? To be honest, it's not bad, but I have seen it too many times that I don't know if there is something wrong with it anymore. Thank you in advance.

Can I have my story's synopsis checked as well? To me, it feels a bit lackluster and not so eye-catching, you know what I mean... Thank you in advance.

Thank you for your opinion. Do you have any advice to make it better? I would appreciate any thought.

Is this still open? If it is, please check mine too! Thank you in advance Saga of Cosmic Journey