I gotchu :)
Okay, so the first thing that I notice is that you have a lot of details smashed together into one paragraph. I'm not going to tell you how to write, but I suggest that you create more paragraphs. :)
Ah I see... I reread what I said and it sounded offensive. I didn't mean for it to be that way. I'll do my best on your drawing, but I'm most likely going to have trouble cuz the lighting is so bad. :)
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/392022/i-was-reincarnated-as-an-scp/
I feel like I f*ked up. 049's chapter was so tasteless that it hurt.
Unfortunately, I felt pressured into the belief that this was my only option because I needed a change within the MC and finally give him an introduction...