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Hello fellow writers, I'm looking to set up some review swaps here on the forum. My offer is simple: I will read and provide a review for your story, and in return, I ask that you read and review one of mine. I guarantee that I will complete my review for your story, offering thoughtful and...

Hi! I'm looking for 1-2 beta readers for my Xianxia story. Specifically, I'm seeking feedback focused on the story's pacing and plot beats. I want to know if the story flows well from one arc to the next, if the cultivation progression feels appropriately paced, if the plot points land with...

I am struggling with the concept of a god protagonist like how do you write one without making them super op but at the same time not making them completely weak and ungodly? Like what even makes a god a god ? Is it immortality (which by itself is a OP ability),faith (again another potential OP...

I happened to come across this little fanfiction site with some hidden gems in it Including stories that you won't find in Ao3 or fanfiction give it a look https://www.mediaminer.org/

Honestly I have been getting the same feedback on improving the first chapter even after a dozen or so revision...and I am tired of it So someone please check and let me know all the changes that I need to do to correct all problems for good Here is the chapter given below Eldralis..the...

Hey everyone, I’m running an experiment to see how different writers would handle my story if they were the ones writing it. The idea is to understand how each of you would approach it based on your own style and choices. Rules: 1. You can change one of the following: - Genre (e.g...

Hi, Any tips on writing better summaries that don’t suck? Mine always feel either too vague or too boring

Hey everyone! I'm searching for brave souls willing to beta-read my fantasy adventure novel. I'm specifically looking for feedback on pacing, character interactions, and overall story flow—no need for detailed grammar corrections unless something really stands out. The story has a light...

Hi,I have recently been working on a parody fantasy story but honestly I feel like it's lacking Just let me know what I should do to improve it This is my first proper parody epic fantasy https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1470776-i-am-the-hero-not/chapter/1470779/

Hey fellow scribblers! So, I'm working on a fantasy parody, and I'm trying to figure out how to best use those classic fantasy tropes – you know, the chosen one, the ancient prophecy, the wise old mentor, the ridiculously overpowered sword, etc. Basically, I want to lean into them hard, but in...

Hi,I have recently been working on this new fantasy story please let me know what you think about it! Constructive criticism are welcome https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1470776/oracle-the-fate-of-heroes/

Hi, I am recently trying to make a text adventure game based on xianxia project and I am looking for the best story and quest ideas can someone help me with this story plot please

I am currently finding it difficult to squeeze time for writing with all my projects,internals etc for my final year of college Please let me know if there is a way to write faster without diminishing my story quality

You know the ones like Goku who is strong enough to wipe out universes but generally acts like a idiot Or clueless ones like Ainz Ooal Gown who is pretty sure he doesn't know what he is doing but somehow impresses his super intelligent subordinates by having made masterplans which he has no...

Hi guys I have been working on this fanfic for a while now and I would appreciate some feedback on it https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1331879/isekai-quartet-magic-research-club/

Hey, everyone! So, I’ve had enough of the same old isekai formula—dude gets transported to a magical world, gets OP, and saves the day. So I made my own anti-isekai story were the one getting crushed to death is truck-kun I am kinda unsure about how to proceed with the plot so any advice...

Since I have proven that 95% of all fanfic here is trash I made my own fanfiction to crush them https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1331879/isekai-quartet-magic-research-club/

That one time Napoleon nearly died to rabbits(Subaru was right rabbits are dangerous) https://www.mentalfloss.com/article/51364/time-napoleon-was-attacked-rabbits