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Hey @pangmida! Thank you so much for sticking around after all that mess. You may start with chapters 1-3 for intro/setup, then hit chapter 13 for action… that's the docks scene where things go sideways fast. If you're still into it after that, chapter 54 brings the heavy stuff. These should...

I hear the frustration about Patreon. Zero supporters feels personal (I know, this is my situation too), like confirmation that the work doesn't matter. But it's just data about where you're starting, not where you'll end up. Most creators build audiences slowly over years of consistent work...

I am not sure if you were pertaining to me with the "humble in your demands" comment, but this is what I actually wrote as a call for reviewers for this thread, request for a swap review. There was no "demands" purely invitation. It was my first time posting here since I joined this platform so...

Shout out to the moderators for acting swiftly. The demolition review has been taken down. Much appreciated <3

Hey, I gave the first 10 chapters a try since that seems to be the norm here. My thoughts below: Your story really surprised me in a good way. Noah’s precognition works more like psychological torture than the usual power fantasy, and that detail makes the writing stand out. The idea of...

I’ve already shared the screenshots and timing so the community can see the pattern for themselves. Whether someone chooses to call it coincidence or not is up to them. I’m not here to argue in circles… my only point was to highlight suspicious behavior so it’s transparent.

That screenshot of readers is from smartypants novel page, listing their readers and timestamps of their visit to their page. I'm just highlighting the timing and probable relation of the two accounts.

Nice try. Based on the writing style and timing of it all, it's very obvious who this is. Then they disabled their profile, just a demolition job. If this is you or your friend (since I traced that they are your reader, if not your own burner account), instead of wasting your time and effort to...

I didn’t say there wasn’t consent. I was clear with my perspective. Glad you’re done because I am too. I think you’re not really understanding what I meant, and I can’t help you with that. But just to highlight what I already said one last time: "I get that with the ring the consent is a...

I get that with the ring the consent is a one-time, permanent thing. I wasn’t questioning that. My point was more about how it read on the page. Even in slave or harem kinks, readers usually want to feel that moment of consent or surrender inside the scene, whether it’s them fighting, giving in...

Hey, just to clear up a couple things… I use bullet points and words like beats because that’s my training. Journalism majors break things down that way to track moments and patterns, so it’s just how I take notes. Not some AI tell. On the consent stuff, I wasn’t pushing against the genre or...

I didn’t use AI to write my reviews. Those are my own notes after reading. AI detectors are not reliable. Studies have shown they give false positives even on human writing (you may google these): A 2023 study in the International Journal for Educational Integrity found major tools flagged...

I have sent you a message with my review! Thanks again :)

Thanks so much for even considering it! And yeah, I totally get it 54 chapters looks like a mountain. I honestly thought people might want more chapters lined up in case they wanted to continue reading, but I see how it can feel like too much to ask for feedback. Sorry about that. Even just...

Hey guys, I just started posting my novel Crown of Ash and Bonds here on SH. It’s basically messy romance + betrayal + magic + politics all rolled into one. If you like characters making terrible choices for love/revenge, it might be your thing. I’m looking for honest feedback (flow, pacing...